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Old Apr 06 2009, 01:20 PM   #1
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Okay, this is going to be a humor/romance thing. I hope you guys liked it.
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Title: Getting into trouble

Pairing: Snow and Stella

Rating: Teen

Genre: Romance, Humor

POV: Snow Viller's

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I knew when I walked in there there was going to be trouble. I just knew it. God, am I a jackass. I wish I had never done it. I regret it till now.

I made the Princess look like a fool. I just knew I would get into trouble. When I opened that door....I was screwed from the very beginning.

This is my story...........
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I know it's short but I will continue it.

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Old Apr 06 2009, 01:30 PM   #2
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Old Apr 06 2009, 02:34 PM   #3
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WTF??? its way too early for ANY kind of fanfiction on ffxiii!!!
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Old Apr 06 2009, 02:59 PM   #4
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^There's plenty of Versus fanfiction around and that's even further away.

Not that that justifies this.
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Old Apr 06 2009, 03:06 PM   #5
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writing a versus fanfiction is just as stupid, doesnt make any sense to write about characters you know from little to nothing about.
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Old Apr 06 2009, 03:06 PM   #6
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This isn't even the worst of it.

Q: What's more depressing than fangirls pairing up Noctfag and Sterile?

A: Fangirls pairing up Noctfag and Lightdick.
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Old Apr 06 2009, 03:07 PM   #7
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lolol, totally agreed shuyu. crossovers are total faggotery
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Old Apr 06 2009, 03:27 PM   #8
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Yeah we don't evern know the bra size of Stella! How can we make a fanfic without that?!
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Old Apr 06 2009, 03:38 PM   #9
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Hm...
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Old Apr 06 2009, 08:29 PM   #10
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i say keep going tell your story i want to see where you take
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Old Apr 07 2009, 02:42 AM   #11
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lol wtf no fanfiction is fucking lame
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Old Apr 07 2009, 12:42 PM   #12
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Well, I'm sorry if you feel like that. Thanks for commenting. I'm going to continue my story, thank you for your opinions.
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Old Apr 07 2009, 07:56 PM   #13
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...........................O.õ''' Alright.........................-really scared of the comments-

Anyway...
I like ALL pairings you did, AnimeGirlPrincess. Please, continue your story ;///; I'll read it *-*
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Old Apr 07 2009, 08:28 PM   #14
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Wrong forum for this sort of thing.

For a start, you should change the rating from 'Teen' to 'XXX (pervasive tentacle rape/murder + graphic close-ups of shitting nipples)'.

That's just to draw the softcore readers.

You'll have to go a lot more hardcore than that if you want to impress the likes of Shuyu, Cathryn and Aurelia.
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Old Apr 08 2009, 12:08 AM   #15
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Thanks for the advice Black Goat, I'll try to make it like that.....if I can. *sweatdrops*

Thank you for your support PriscyIchigo. I'll start updating soon.

I guess Shuyu, Cathryn, and Aurelia are the Top dogs here then......Oppss......
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Old Apr 08 2009, 01:21 AM   #16
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Maybe I should start from the beginning: Ever since our worlds, Pulse and the Prince's kingdom "merged temporary" to each other I was forced, by Lightning herself, to investigate this so-called Princess of Tenbrea.

She told me,"Snow, you need to go under-cover."

I obviously asked why and she replied,"Investigate this 'Princess of Tenbrea.' She's a threat to the Crystals. Go under-cover as her bodyguard. Vanille will give you everything you need for the mission."

With her blue eyes she glared at me. I hated being under Lightning's orders. They were too......demanding. Strange, she joined the Nora that's under MY command and she treats me like this?

Oh well....

"Yes, alright. Lightning?" She stopped glaring and asked what. "How long is this going to last?"

She said two words: Only Temporary.

Strange, you would think that the advsiors and all those stuffy people would at least do a background check on me, but they just looked at me once, talked about what kind of position I wanted, and asked me a few *personal* questions.

They began asking the most obvious Questions:

"How did you get into being a bodyguard?"

A. I helped one of my friends in her mission to protect her by one of my superiors and that's how I got to be a bodyguard.

"Where are you from?"

A. A far away place named Pulse. It's all wilderness until the Soilders came and ransacked our town. I had to move here because of those reasons and also my mission as a bodyguard to a friend.

"What is your age?"

A. "Don't you think it's rude to ask a man a question like that?"

...............Alright then......I guess you are around 23-27, it's fine. An age a man is at his peak.

Where did you get your training?

A. "I trained under my superiors who taught me everything I knew. I'm skilled in ice summonings and all kinds of guns. I can also carry two people."

After all of those questions, they gave me a job as a bodyguard. Under the Princess. I smiled as I walked to the meeting to greet and introduce myself to the Princess who I now know is named Stella.

First thoughts came to my mind: Is she a snob? I bet she was a pampered princess from day one. She is good at anything except looking good and ordering people around? Bossy, bossy. I bet I'm going to do chores all day and slave over her until I collapse.

The doormen opened the royal doors that led to the throne room. And what I saw wasn't the Princess I thought she was......

So that's Stella....the Princess of Tenbrea.

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Oerba Dia Vanille is the pig-tailed girl's name in the official site in Japanese. Nora is the Resistance group that Snow is leading: Gadot, Lebreau, and Maqui.

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