CG project. FFVXIII "tired Prince"

[Ookami-Herutsu]

Yea i know! the eyes are messed! the tracing is B A D!!!! but thats all becuase i dont have a tablet anymore so i had to mouse it. Anyways ill fix it up sooner or later! anyways PLZ critizise my work. I really need it cuz i wont know where to improve myself!



-Ookami Herutsu

[Pulse]

Shading on the clothing is amazing. Stunning actually, but the outline is okay for a mouse effort. Get the tablet fixed and then repost your work. I am sure it will be much better.

Josh

[Enedok]

I'm astunned by the kewl work on clothes so we only miss the same shading on his face arms and shoes. A background would be cool too.

[Yurian]

Nice start ookami

The things I'm a bit iffy about are that the legs seem a bit long in comparison to the torso. Also, if you're considering to add some sort of background - maybe even just a gradient, you may want to tone it now or add some basic colors. Right now you're using a white background, which makes the character seem darker - it may become more difficult to determine the background later after you've detailed the entire character. Unless you want to keep the background white.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to this Keep up the good work! Get some blues in there!

[Inferno187]

Originally Posted by GHenrik

I'm astunned by the kewl work on clothes so we only miss the same shading on his face arms and shoes. A background would be cool too.

I agree. The shading on the clothes is awesome, but you still need to work on the boots, arms, legs and face. But as you said urself its only 45% complete so I'm looking forward to seeing your final version

[Xion]

very nice, its not CG BTW(CG is computer generated), its considered artwork