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This is my first story in english. Maybe it's a fanfiction to VersusXIII, I don't know how to describe it.
~ JUST LOVE ~
Prologue
It was a long working day for him. The stars over his head sparkled on the night sky like little splints of crystalls on a darkblue velvet. The young man sighted. < Who are you? >, he thought helpless.
Since three days he couldn't sleep any more. A few days ago he dreamt of a young women with darkgrey hair. She seemed to be an angel, but she had no white wings like angels...
Suddenly he heard someone's voice. He twinkled and turned around.
"Hey, Vherzuil! What are you thinking of today's film sequence? Do you like it?"
It was Nia, the actress of the little sister of his character. The only sexteen year old girl was everything but not shy. Vherzuil smiled a little bit as he saw her enthusiasm. He raised one eyebrow.
"Well, I went down so many steps that my feet hurt."
She laughed.
"Yeah, I watched you through the monitors. You were just great! You see, your work is very important."
He shook his head.
"Oh no! Don't say this! I'm only the actor of the..."
"Main character!", she broke in on him.
"Yes...", he said quietly and looked at her thoughtfully.
Nia smiled abashed, said good-bye to him and went to her best friend Seela, who stands on the other side of the street. Vherzuil greeted Seela and went away.
"And?", Seela asked Nia intented.
The sixteen year old girl gave a strand of her brown hair behind her ear.
"What have you two talked about?"
"Nothing important."
"Did he asked you about the woman he saw?"
"No."
Seela sighted.
"You should tell him."
"And what do you think should I say to him? Like: < Hey, Vherzuil, I love you! I'm the one you saw in your dream. And, hey! It wasn't a dream! You only thought that you have slept at that time. > Oh, please Seela! Don't be silly!"
She looked down into her cup of tea. Her glance was sad when she looked at Seele again.
"He will never love me", she ment quietly. "He's twenty! He thinks I'm just a girl. Nothing more."
Seela shook her head.
"Oh man! We have a lot of work to do! I don't want to make cases on myself if this would end in tragedy! Come on! We have to make tracks! Let's see what Seela has in her treasure chest for your little dreamprince."
Nia laughed and Seela smiled.
"Come out!", a voice shouted.
Vherzuil opened his eyes. < Well, this is my work >, he thought. < And I love it. >
He stood up from his seat and paced through the big halls until he stood behind the open entrance. And he saw...
"And CUT!!!"
Vherzuil looked around. It wasn't dark here as in the story. And he wasn't alone with many soldiers who wanted him to be dead...
"Thanks for your acting, Vherzuil!", director Tanaka said to the about twenty year old man. "We have to do this sequence once more again, after breakfast."
Vherzuil nodded, sat down on a chair and waited for his friends. After a while his best friend Raidon arrived.
"Hey, Vherzuil!", he said to him. "What's going on?"
"Nothing interesting at present. I only shot the new opening scene."
"Oh yes, I've seen it! Very nice your glance at all these..."
He turned over and looked at the three big cameras and the members of the filmcrew, those who were running around.
"...people. Was it enjoyable?"
"Very enjoyable", Vherzuil said with sarcasm. "The floodlight dazzled me, and there was no backgroundmusic during my appearance, but it was...enjoyable, of course."
Raidon smirked and sat down near Vherzuil when they heard a well known voice.
"Hey guys!"
"Nia!", said the actor of the prince surprised. "Where were you? I've missed you the last hours!"
Nia blushed.
"Oh...äh...well...I..."
She looked on Vherzuil and sighted.
"Well...I hate you!"
Then she went away without saying another word.
Raidon made a amazed face.
"Wow! No woman said that to me! You're a lucky man, Vherzuil."
He tapped him on the shoulder. The young man nodded thoughtfully.
"I hope so."
"You will not guess what happend to me today!", Vherzuil told Nia, when he sat down next to her for dinner. "I overslept the beginning of the shot. The cameras were just running and I slept on the throne like a baby."
Nia laughed.
"Only you can do such things like that! What did Takana-san?"
"He let me sleep. When I woke up he told me it was the best shot ever."
The girl smiled.
"Do you think that was a compliment?"
Vherzuil showed a big grin.
"We'll see."
Raidon talked with Seela. Nia kept still. During the whole time Vherzuil watched her. He loved the way she shook her head when she was surprised of something. He loved the way she smiled at him. Suddenly he realised that he never wanted to release her.
"Raidon, you are now the only one who could help me!", Vherzuil said to his friend later.
"What's up?"
"I fell in love."
The lightbrown haired guy raised his eyebrows.
"Congratulations! Who is she?"
"Don't speak so loud!", he fizzled. "She's here!"
"Where < here >?", Raidon asked and looked around. "Does she has a name?"
"Yes, of course she has!"
Vherzuil sighted.
"And she is younger than me."
"What's your problem?"
"I can't go to her and say: < Hey, Nia! How are you this morning? By the way, I fell in love with you! And what's about you? > That would be catastrophic!"
"Only in your mind."
"Why are you so cool?! I'm afraid that she'll refuse me."
"She will not."
"Why are you so shure about that?"
"Didn't you registered her attitude the last weeks? She is nervous when she's with you. In my opinion she fell with you in love as well."
"She hates me!", he said downhearted.
"I think she wanted to say another thing. You should ask her."
Vherzuil sighted.
"I'll ask her soon. Thanks."
Raidon smirked.
Hey, guys! This is the 2nd chap. Hope you'll like it. Thanx for reading.^^
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Chapter 2
"Nokuto, no! I will not approve it!", she resisted to him.
The two stood in the throne room. It was the time before the final battle. Vherzuil noticed the light, which let Nias hair glinted. Surrounded by the whole film crew he had to concentrate, but his problem was that he couldn't. Nearly too late he recogniced that Nia already said her text. Nokuto looked a little bit surprised.
"Why? I will not die. You know that I'm unbeaten."
Nia showed her most determined countenance.
"I will NOT reign this city! NO!"
"You don't have to. I'm still the prince here."
"I'll kill you if you go out there!!", she screamed at him.
"Please, come down a bit! I'm not in danger..."
"He told me if you go to this meeting he'll kill you!", she said trembling and looked up to him. "He found out how to break you crystallshield. You'll not protected in battle!"
Nokuto turned pale, but then he recollected himself.
"I have no alternative", he ment quietly. "I'm sorry, sis. Maybe this is the last moment we have."
"I'm so sorry that I can't fight with you", she told him sad. "I would give all to protect you."
"I know", he countered. "Fare well."
He turned around and went away.
"I'm sorry, I can't focus!"
She excused herself and looked at Takana.
"Cut then! Thank you all!"
Vherzuil waited for her in the mask.
"You were just great!", he told her exalted. "I thought you would get worried about the new dialogue, but you were cool as ever."
Nia smiled.
"Oh, you were great too! Your glance in the beginning was...perfect!"
"There is only one scene left", he said hushed.
"Yes, Nokuto will die. Wounderful", she ment with sarcasm.
"You don't like the end, do you?"
"Why should I like it? What's likeable about it?", she asked him disquietingly.
"I'm sorry. I don't want you to..."
"No", she interrupted him without anger. "I'm sorry. I don't wanted to talk to you like this."
He nodded and gazed at her with excitement.
"Do you really hate me?", he asked her.
"Huh?"
The brown haired girl looked at her comrade. She was astonished as she saw the pain in his eyes.
"You said that you hate me. Is that true?"
"No", she said quietly and shook her head. The young man sighted relieved.
"Then why have you said it to me? I'm confused about it." < You have hurt me with these words. >
"Well, I..."
Nia looked up to him with anguish. He saw her fear with surprise. She tried to speak, but she couldn't disclose her feelings for him.
"You made me nervous", she gave an evasive answer.
< Raidon is right! >, he thought astonished. "Why?"
< He makes me insane with his questions! >, the sixteen year old girl thought.
< What should I answer him? I can't tell him the truth! He wouldn't understand
me. >
The twenty year old actor sighted.
"Okay then. I have a problem. Maybe you can help me."
"What is it?", she asked immediatly, cheery that he changed the topic.
He gazed at her thoughtfully.
"I've dreamt of a young woman with darkgrey hair. I was confused about it, but since I saw her I have realiced that I..."
He looked into Nias eyes.
"That I...Well it's quite tough for me to say it..."
"Hey, you two! What are you doing here?!", Raidon shouted when he came into the maskroom. "Don't be lazy! We have so much work to do!"
Vherzuil rolled his eyes. Nia just shook her head.
"What are you guys up to?", the light-brown haired man asked them amazed about their silence. "Have I bother you? Sorry, if I..."
He looked at Vherzuil.
"I apologize", he said quietly and bow like Yuna. Then he went out and closed the door.
Vherzuil and Nia looked at each other and broke out in laugh.
After a while Vherzuil get seriously again.
"Do you want to walk with me? It's a little stuffy here."
She nodded. They went out of the mask room and promenaded in the big Palacegarden.
"What you wanted to tell me?", Nia asked him a bit later.
He stopped and stood now in front of her.
"Promise me, that we'll be friends further on."
"We'll always be friends!", she said surprised and nooded. "I promise."
< What's so hard for him to say?" >, she asked herself helpless.
"Okay. Ähm...I fell in love..."
< Oh no! >, Nia thought aghasted.
"...with you."
"What?!"
"Yeah, I know I'ts crazy!", Vherzuil said ashamed. "Forget about it."
He moved along, when Nia realized his words.
"No! I would'nt!", she decided.
Vherzuil stopped abruptly and turned around.
"Why not?"
"Because I...", she attempted to answer and burst into tears.
Vherzuil went back to her and looked at her appalled. He hug her charily.
"Hey...", he whispered gently.
"I...love...you too."
Vherzuil was frozen. He thought he had problems with his ears. Nia looked up to him and looked him in the eye.
"I thought you will not understand my feelings for you", she admited.
Vherzuils head was blank.
"Well, ...thanks for telling me! I'm very relieved now."
"So I am", she said and smiled at him. He smiled back and he thought that the stars twinkled lighter that night as before...
Nice chapter. Hmn... lemme guess. Vherzuil is the Prince, Seela is the Skirtgirl, Nia is... the new girl, Raidon is someone new too, maybe the Shotgun Guy. Right?
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Love will keep us alive
Even the darkest night
Will shine forever...
Hmn... lemme guess. Vherzuil is the Prince, Seela is the Skirtgirl, Nia is... the new girl, Raidon is someone new too, maybe the Shotgun Guy. Right?
I think you'll be surprised now. Yes, Vherzuil plays the prince, and Seela plays that person you think, but I've borrowed the appearence of Nia from Final Fantasy 13. ^^ There she has no name as yet we know. I've seen only a few pics of her. She inspired me to create Nia. I know Nias hair is a bit diffrent...(it's the girl in my avatar).
And Raidon is...well, I don't know. Some best friend of Vherzuil. I didn't have thought about it so far. There are no limits for your fantasia. ^^
Im very impressed, a story who the chars are final fantasy versus xiii actors is a interesting and genial idea. I hope i could write like you. I love storys.
Cant wait for chapter 3. You sure are a writer. I cant imagine how yu write in your first language,
Thanx, Moklin! I write in my mother languarge since I was eight years old. It was hard work to get there where I'm now, but it was also fun.^^
Here is Chap 3. ^^ I hope there are not many mistakes in.
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Chapter 3
"Hey guys!", Seela called Vherzuil and Nia who have just returned from the Palacegardens. "What's going on?"
Nia and Vherzuil smiled at each other.
"Should I say it?", she asked him.
He smiled happy.
"If you wish."
"Say what?", Seela repeated.
"Well", the brown-haired girl said. "Vherzuil is my bofriend now."
"You're kidding!", laughed Seela. She looked to Vherzuil, who smiled big. "You're not?!"
"It's true", he comfirmed.
"Oh, that's wounderful! I share my happiness with you two!"
Vherzuil laid his arms around Nia.
"Well, I'll let you alone now! Bye!", Seela announced and went away.
"She's a little bit surprised, isn't she?", Vherzuil ment.
Nia laughed and nodded.
Next morning...
"Vherzuil? Where are you?", Nia shouted out of the bathroom.
"Still sleeping", he mumbled.
"You have to stand up!", she called on him.
"Why?", he asked without opening his eyes.
"Because Tanaka-san said that the fight scenes are rubbish."
"He did'nt!", countered stunned.
Now he was awaken. He sat up in bed and looked at Nia who had a grin on her lips.
"No, he didn't!", she shook her head.
Vherzuil rolled his eyes.
"And for what you've wake me up now?", he numbled.
"Well, I just wanted to talk with you, honey!", she told him.
"Don't call me that!"
"Then tell me how I should call you, honey!"
"Argh!", he made. "Everything, but not honey!"
"Okay."
She sat next to him on the bed and gazed at him.
"What is it?", he asked her after a while.
"Nothing important. I'm just looking at you."
"I see. Then continue it. I'll take a shower now."
Nia watched him as he went into the bathroom.
"You can come with me, if you want", he invited her.
He was amazed that she really followed him. He got nervous.
"Okay, now turn around please, 'cause I'm a bit shy."
"That's unfair, honey."
"Right!", he said shortspoken and pulled the curtain between her and him.
The sixteen year old actress sat down on a chair. Vherzuil thought about the situation.
He didn't wanted to talk to her like this. He sighted and focused on the hot water and closed his eyes. Tonight he has dreamt of Nia. She talked with Raidon. Suddenly his best friend kissed her and Nia did nothing to stop him! Stupid dream.
Vherzuil felt a deep pain in his left leg. He opened his eyes again, looked down and saw a great effusion of blood. He furrowed one eye-brow.
< Where did I get this? >, he asked himself. He couldn't remember it.
Then he recollected how the nightmare went on. He got so angry that he has killed Raidon, but a second Raidon came and then another. He killed every Raidon. After he thought he killed every Raidon on this planet, Nia asked him what he has done and why. He didn't now what to say. She started crying and he turned around and walked away. Then he woke up.
< Am I jealous? >, he thought. < No, it's only a silly nightmare, nothing more. >
"Verzuil?", he heard Nias voice behind the curtain. "Don't you burn? You're over ten minutes in the shower!"
Vherzuil nodded and came out. Nia has closed her eyes and he was thankful because of that.
"You can look now!", he told her a bit later. "Thanks for don't watching me."
She didn't answered when she opened her eyes. Vherzuil found no way, but he felt that she has changed since yesterday. Something in her gaze told him that.
Later he met Raidon on the set.
"Hey, lucky guy! What's up?", the light-brown-haired man asked him. "I've heard that you and Nia were together last night. Is that true?"
"Correct."
< Please, don't ask me about it! >, Vherzuil prayed.
"And? How was it?", asked Raidon with an big grin.
< Shit! >
"Was what?", the twenty year old actor asked back as unsuspecting as possible.
"Come on!", Raidon ment. "You don't want to tell me, that you two didn't made love, do you?"
Vherzuil sighted soundless.
"I not only want to tell you, I do."
He looked Raidon in the eye. His respondent was stunned.
"That's...but...! What have you guys done all night? Talking?!"
< Have I already said "shit" before? >, Vherzuil thought droopy.
"Well, not all time. We've slept too, but not...well, you know what I mean."
"You're like an angel, Vherzuil!", Raidon replied and shook his head. "I don't understand you! She's cute, she loves you, she wants you..."
"How do you know?", Vherzuil asked. A dangerous sparkle was now in his gaze as he looked at his best friend. He thought about his nightmare. Why was he so alarmed?
Raidon didn't realised the alteration of Vherzuil. He shook only his head.
"Know, know! That's clear for everyone here! And you are doing nothing."
"You know I've never had a partnership before, and that I hate One-night-stands. I've enough from all that facile stuff!"
He stood abruptly up from the chair he has sat on when he started talking with Raidon.
"I apologize, that I'm not like you!"
Then he went away without saying another word. His friend stared at him befuddled.
"What's with him?", Seela asked Raidon with surprise.
"I think she had a bad dream", he ment shrugging. "I had a nightmare too. I've dreamt that I've kissed Nia and Vherzuil killed me, but I came back many times. He always killed me. After a while I woke up. Weird nightmare! Nothing more."
Seela raised one eye-brow. She recollected that Nia told her this dream too...
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Your Story is amazing I luv the chapters and youre "writing style" don't how I write this, so I hope I write this correct... Do you want to become a writer? Youre story is soo cute *___* I want read more XDDDDD
I thank you, Yue, for your review too. ^^ When I was a child I wanted to become a writer, but after years I decided only to write for fun.
I wrote chap 3 late at night. I feared it would be very bad, because I was so tired at that time. I'm glad that it isn't.^^
Well, I'll hurry with the next chap. ^^
JUST LOVE
I write in my mother languarge since I was eight years old. It was hard work to get there where I'm now, but it was also fun.^^
I luv the chapters and youre "writing style" don't how I write this, so I hope I write this correct... Do you want to become a writer? Youre story is soo cute *___* I want read more XDDDDD
