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Old Jul 01 2007, 08:21 PM   #1
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These are only ROUGH IDEADS i've had. I've kind of lagged on my FFvsXIII story, but i've given up on that and changed towards a side story which gives you the perspective on Leiea and Osuma, two Elite soldiers thrown into the battle between a unruly government and the slowly dying city of Desiea.

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Leiea the young female protagonist of this whole story shizzle wakes up around her dead family, killed by a government paid group called N.E.O. (unknown to her at the time) But unfortunatly due to heavy head truma she suffered memory loss cutting the last ten years of her life off, leaving her thinking she is 17 when in reality she was 27. Eventually she fled and ran out of the city and into an empire heavily ruled by a rouge government.
She knew she was of royale blood and all that tosh, but kept her identity unknown to anybody, she gave herself a new name, Nisha Estal, (Real name - Leiea Rosheme) so she could seal her identity to the world.
Later on she applys for a part within N.E.O Elite force for a new start in her life, only to forget her past (not much luck seeing as shes already forgotten ten years)
But once she is sent on a mission to retrieve information on the crystal city (her home city Desiea) she has flash backs of her forgotten ten years and unravels important information her father gave her within those lost years, also to top it off she encounters the heir to the throne who looks freakishly similar to her younger brother. Confusing her, she flee's the mission and hides within the shanty towns situated on the outskirts of Desiea.
N.E.O. eventually find out of her behavoir and set out to find her.
But not relising she had left her partner/lost interest in the N.E.O Elite force partnerless, Osuma, and after spending 3 years with her in N.E.O before hand they had a strong relationship (non sexual) but he never wanted her to leave, due to the fact his previous wife died in a mission she was sent on leaving him alone, and seeing as he promised he'd never want to loose her (obviously expressing deep emotion compared to his cocky tone and attitude) he was lets say. pissed off and wanted her back.
But once N.E.O retrieve her after 3 months on the run, she is brutally torchured into what she had seen within the mission, but she didn't conform and was eventually shot, beaten and bruised, AND! almost saved my a very very pissed of Osuma but due to the impact on her, she slipped into a coma and dumped within the city of Desiea [still with me?] But later she was found by a couple roaming the empty streets and taken to a near by underground hospital.
And as for Osuma, he was suspended from N.E.O and held within isolation due to his retaliation and assumed to be an accomplice of Leieas in her escape.
I then take you through the life she has while being in her coma for 5 months, being able to talk to her father, locked within her own home in Desiea, begining to remember all her forgotten past, but the only way she could escape her coma was to set free, but she was blinded by her self letting go, giving up on life but is eventually convinced by her mother (who meant an extreme deal to her due to the neglect her mother gave her) who coaxed her to break free of her confinement and help her slowly deterating brother (FFvsXIII male protagonist)

Im not going to type anymore otherwise id be telling the whole story.
These ideas do not nessacerally complie with the story sometimes so don't question me on it. i know
All i ask is just some feedback on the ideas itself and how i could change anything, or even your own ideas, that would be a help


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Daggers plunged within my hands didn’t compare to the pain I felt next.

Even though I’ve already experienced first hand at being shot, I never wanted to feel the retching pain again, and when the gun was held to my stomach, I knew I was going to relive it, many times. I didn’t hear anything, my mind was completely blank, and all I could stare at was the soldier leaning towards me, holding the gun to my stomach and smiling in his soon to be triumph. He brought his hand to my face and wiped the blood dripping out of my mouth onto his black leather glove, chuckling at the thought of the many times he had inflicted harm upon me, his sly face looked like a snake, he was one, and he knew it.
No noise rang through my ears, but I suddenly felt an impact within my chest, which heaved all the oxygen from me, leaving me to gasp for air, I struggled as I looked around the room blindly, I could feel myself falling backwards but my back hit the wall behind me and held my body up and as I looked down towards my stomach I could only see that colour. Red

~

I walked past a few guards on patrol; I took note of their conversation as I walked ‘slowly’ past.
“Ran from a mission, typical woman”
“I know, she was sent on a mission within Deseai, now everybody knows any mission that is within that god forsaken city is to do with the crystal.”
My mind tweaked and I instantly pounced on the nearest unsuspecting guard, throwing him to the wall.
“Where is she?”
I intimidated him in order to receive answers, I wanted answers.
“D-d-down the hall, Cell B4 in the isolation unit” He stuttered back with the answer I wanted, I was surprised he didn’t even question my outburst, but he knew as well as I did, we where close, we used to be partners, everybody made instant assumptions.
“Thank you.”
I spat at him and began to walk off, leaving the shocked men on their duty.
I started pacing quickly down the hall and turning, passing and pushing through a small crowd which was congregated around the isolation unit door, I pushed through and almost threw half of the crowd away as I rushed to get through. I could feel everybody watching me, I knew instantaneously what they where thinking, they all knew what was going on and was already making assumptions on what I would do as I reached the guarded door.
A low ranking soldier stood in front of the door.
“Stand away from the door sir.”
He said sternly, backing me further from the entrance, but I wasn’t taking any note of what he wanted, so I pulled my fingers into a fist and threw my clenched hand into his jaw, throwing him back to the door and falling down unconscious, I heard small gasps within the congregation of people, but I ignored them and carried on, flicked away the pain in my knuckles and walked through the door.
I looked both ways down the corridor and spotted two armored soldiers running towards me, rifles in hand.
I quickly ran towards them not giving them chance to fire, I held out my arms and threw myself towards them; they both hit my firmly held outstretched arms and flew back and onto the floor.
I skidded to stop where a sign was pinned to the wall, pointing me further down the hall towards cells C9 to B14, I began pacing down a few more meters until I came at a junction, again I looked up at a sign pinned up against the wall in front of me, pointing me right, I turned down the hall, running fast, looking behind me checking for any incoming soldiers, but none came.
I checked the doors as I came running past.
B2…B3…B4.
I halted instantly and began kicking at the bolted door until it flung open only moments later.
The room was dark in contrast to the clean white hallways, my attention was instantly brought towards a man who stood in front of a lifeless body on the floor, I focused on the body, it was her, breathing heavily and blood seemingly wrapped around her body.
Anger fueled me and it showed within my face, I could feel it.
The man whom stood before her turned around, smiling at me, gun in hand, almost laughing at his success in shooting her.
This only angered me more, adding more fuel to the fire, so I slowly reached my hand around my back and pulled dagger from my belt and held it to my side.
The only thing that could be heard was the gasps of Leonia slowly bleeding, trying to save herself; this only spurred me into fighting more.
I had to fight, if only I ever where to see her alive again.

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Old Jul 01 2007, 08:23 PM   #2
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I found myself being given a mission, back home, once I read the memo I was given, I couldn’t help but feel insecure, I didn’t want to go home, not now.
Yet my curiosity was spurred by a sentence which was, ‘carefully’ placed within the memo.

If you encounter a suspicious man, do not fight him. Otherwise your death will be the consequence.

It aroused my senses, made a sudden feeling like I had met this man, yet I knew nothing about him, but my senses seemingly knew something I didn’t.
I stood and read the sentence over and over, repeating it inside my head so many times, I realized my mission now had a purpose, not to retrieve information I already knew about, but to find out who this person was, because I could feel, it was somebody close to me.

~

The break in the silence came when Ryai decided to make an appearance into my confinement.
“Hey, I bet you’ll miss this mission without me.”
“Why do I highly doubt that Ryai”
“Because I’ve been on every mission with you up until now, these past 2 years I’ve been showing you the highlights of group effort, now it’s your time to fly solo.” He grinned.
“The highlights...hmm” I pondered on previous missions we had, had in the past.
But couldn’t help but smirk at his smug appearance, making it all seem as if those past 2 years where his doing and not mine. If I wasn’t in some of those missions, he would have most likely of been dead, his laid back persona was his undoing, yet, he still had a serious side to his work.
There was a small silence as he watched me; I could feel him watching me.
“Your ass looks nice in that suit.” He smiled.
“Keep comments like that to yourself.” I spat out.
“It was a compliment, trust me you’ll appreciate that comment in the future, once you get all the new recruits come in and hound you; at least I told you and didn’t snigger it to my friends.”
“What friends? Besides the last time you tried to hit on me you ended up with a bullet in your foot.”
I rolled my eyes, I found him slightly annoying at the time, but I needed the company before I made my way into the inner city.
“Unfortunately more people like me, and you didn’t need to remind me about that bullet.” He dug his heels in and leaned in closer, broadening his smile.
As much as I loved the attention and his warm breath on my cheek, I just couldn’t appreciate it at the time, I found myself frustrated by his affection towards me.
“Goodbye Ryai.” I stared fiercely at him and began to walk away but I felt a tug on my shoulder, pulling me back, to my previous position, I knew it was Ryai. Once he had pulled me back, I saw him smiling down upon me.
“Don’t die.” He gave an extra smile as he said it, I knew it was some kind of reassurance, but it didn’t work.
I wanted to leave, but his clasp on my shoulders held me tight in place, it was almost as if he didn’t want me to leave, but I had to, my curiosity drove me to find out who this unknown figure I could sense was.
“I won’t die and, don’t even think that, you know it won’t happen.”
I tried to say the first three words in a calm mood, but the came out tight and restrained, giving him the impression I was scared, but I wasn’t, I was only nervous. As the stuttered words left my mouth I brush his hands from my shoulders but he grabbed hold of my fore arms, pulling me closer to him until I could feel the warmth of his body around me, holding me, hugging me, embracing me.
But I somehow felt weak within the moment of affection, I felt, sick, all I could see was the radiant colour of blue, gleaming into my eyes, blinding me, making me feel faint, my legs couldn’t hold up the weight of my body and I could feel them slowly beginning to buckle, yet the sensation began to fade away as Ryai’s hold on me loosened, until he was back to holding my forearms.
His embrace somehow soothed me, yet I couldn’t help feel nausea over the blue aura which took over my body during that time.
Ryai continued his affection by whispering softly to himself.
“Ok.” He sighed in frustration.




His breath brushed against my neck, it almost felt like sweet ecstasy against my skin, this time I appreciated the affection and gratitude he was giving me and lightly kissed his cheek.
“This time, its goodbye Ryai, we’ll have missions after this.”
“Yes we will.” He said that sentence in his usual cocky mood along with his smile which I took into account.
He loosened his grip on my arms and let me walk off.

~

I received a memo only a few hours after I was assigned as a N.E.O Elite soldier.
What the letter contained was a brief on a mission I was to attend immediately; it informed me of a rebel group which was situated on the outskirts of the outer city, and was believed at the time that the group where planning to try and bomb N.E.O’s head quarters, so elimination of the group was necessary.
What the memo refrained from telling me was that I was going to have a partner.

I made my way to a rendezvous point I was given and told to wait for a tall dark figure; well that was what description the memo gave me.
As I waited, I couldn’t help but feel a rush of excitement, yet I knew this mission could cost my life, but still, I was to well equip with weaponry.
I waited at the point for around 30 minutes; my patience was begging to wear as the time continually passed with no sign of a ‘tall dark figure’
I waited another 5 minutes on the cold dark street until I heard any signs of life apart from the silence of the streets. I could hear the light rumble of an engine, and a faint light coming closer towards me, I could instantly smell the scent of petrol fluid within the air, leaving a rotten taste on my tongue.
As the unknown vehicle came closer I could tell by the increasing noise of the engine that it was that of a motorcycle.
I stepped out onto the side of the road and waited until the vehicle slowed down beside me.
The driver fitted the description the memo gave me; the unknown figure slowly took off his dark pristine black helmet and revealed his face of which astounded me, he looked seemingly older than other N.E.O. members I had met, he looked in his late 20’s whereas most of the N.E.O. members I had encountered failed to even reach the age of 20. I took note of his features; he looked distinctly rugged, had light stubble yet looked handsome and suited the features he had, but what I noticed most about him was his eyes. They where that of a deep red nothing like I had ever seen. His appearance would make any naïve woman melt, a dark mysterious handsome figure would take any woman off her feet, but unfortunately for this man, I wasn’t so naïve to his good looks.
“You Leiea?”
His voice sounded cocky, he seemed to be that of a confident figure, and his voice was quite deep which added to the impression he gave off on me.
“That’s a bit informal isn’t it?”
“What is?” He smiled with his reply; it fitted with his cocky attitude.
“Strolling around and asking random women if their name is Leiea.” I replied to his smile with a grin.
“Well it may have been informal, but seeing as you’re the only woman around this area I can make assumptions can’t I”
His attitude astounded me, his laid back persona was almost like a breath of fresh air compared to other Soldiers I had spoken to, others unlike him where strict and showed no true emotions when working.
A silence struck for a few moments.
“Let’s go then.” He gestured the back seat of his bike to me, but unbeknown to him, I had my own means of transportation.
“If you expect me to ride with you, you have your expectations way to high.”
“Excuse me” he sounded shocked.
“I have my own means of transportation.”
“Oh really.” He said grinning at his remark.
I proved his sarcastic words wrong.
I walked back into a darkened area and slowly rolled out a large black bike, given to me by N.E.O. It was significantly larger than the character I had to call partner, his face changed instantly, but it didn’t stop his attitude.
“You have better transport than me, but it doesn’t mean you can’t drive any better.”
“I think you’ll find, the bigger the better.” I replied slyly.
He stared at me, with a constant smile on his face.
“Fine, lets race. First one across the bridge wins.” He pointed towards a bridge which was almost a mile away from where we currently where. He smirked and then quickly proceeded and slid his helmet back on, then quickly starting his engine and racing off in front of me.
I rushed into placing on my helmet almost fumbling, but once I jumped onto the bike and started the engine, I was instantly beginning to catch him up, only seconds later I was next to him.
Once we reached the bridge the speed instantly increased between both vehicles.
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Ryai – Concept 12

Soldier 8053 Elite Unit – Leiea Rosheme
Birth date – 23rd reane
Whereabouts – Currently unknown

Since 4th of draceme 2410, Soldier 8053, also referred to as Leiea Rosheme has abandoned a mission to retrieve information involved within the city of Desiea.
Believed to have fled from the city and to the shanty towns situated within the North West border of the kingdom, unfortunately despite the troops sent out to retrieve the soldier alive, no trace of the Soldier has been found.

Also some late suspicions have come to my attention that Soldier 8053 is believed to be one of the supposedly killed heirs to the throne, Queen Leiea Threnoera Rosheme.
The suspicions where brought to the attention of the N.E.O. only but a week past when an Elite Soldier believed to be an accomplice of the missing soldier confessed to the powers Soldier 8053 possessed.

Unfortunately we cannot clarify that she is a surviving heir to the Desiea throne despite the logical argument that also the Royal Family of Desiea possess such powers due to their heritage of a rare crystal.
Yet the possibility that she could have caught the strand of unique powers which where used within the Blue project where Troop 32 where used for experimental purposes is plausible, due to the fact that her partner Soldier 4302 Elite Unit Osuma Lesicabian was one of the test subjects used within Troop 32, 2 years ago.

In order to retrieve back Soldier 8053, we will reassemble the remaining survivors of troop 32, excluding Soldier 4303 Elite Soldier Ryai Lesicabian, to hunt down Soldier 8053 alive to later be questioned.

Council Member
Briene Tetra


My mind went blank once I finished the memo.

~

Leiea – Consept 13

We slowly crept up the stair case trying to avoid making the sound of creaks within the floorboards below us.
The hand gun was clutched tightly within my hands; if we encountered any rebels I wanted the upper hand of preparation. Ryai was pressed up against my back; I ignored his presence and kept on tip toeing up the stairs until I reached the top, I only brought my head around the corner until I felt the whip of bullets rush past me, I ducked back behind the stair case wall, pushing into Ryai as he hung upon me like a lost puppy.
“More of a challenge for me then” Ryai sighed and jumped past me and began to fire bullets from the rifle he held as he stood open on the landing. He played with death on almost every occasion; it astounded me at the time of his sheer gut and courage of jumping into situations fast, but I could tell he enjoyed it, it was his job.
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