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You're a very good artist! The faces seem a bit weird, but everything else looks fantastic.
I especially liked "Snow's Pain" and "Scarlet Moon", the latter more so.
Thank you. And since you're now the 4th to mention the faces I think I'll have to to something about that.
In other news:
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Out Of The Woods
Took about a week to make, though I didn't actually draw every day lazy as I am. I tried the "blocking" as suggested by novaheaven, though I feel like I screwed up the legs still.
I also tried the the alternative colouring method as suggested by Ordella, and personally I think that turned out well.
Again I'd like some critic and some praise
Also I am well aware that I screwed up the lighting on the sword, but you learn from you mistakes.
First of all thank you. And about the faces, was there anything specific you think I should change, or was it just the style in general? Because I'm sticking to my style
You're welcome. Nothing specific about the faces, really. I just would like to see more depth in the eyes, perhaps adding pupils, lashes, etc.
But, like you said, that your style. Everything else on your drawings reeks creativity, color, & vibrance.
I think you have a real talent with details - for example; Lightning in Snow's Pain. Keep working on using and improving details in your drawings and you'll be able to create som really impressive pictures (: It sure does require a lot of patience though
In Out Of The Woods your colouring and shading has already improved a lot; looks awesome. Shading is one of the most important factors to memorable art, and it can really help to set the mood in it.
Snow's pain ♥♥♥
Hahaha, poor face xD. That one is a brilliant one!!!
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You're welcome. Nothing specific about the faces, really. I just would like to see more depth in the eyes, perhaps adding pupils, lashes, etc.
But, like you said, that your style. Everything else on your drawings reeks creativity, color, & vibrance.
Ow yeah, pupils is a good suggestion, I didn't even realise I weren't drawing them
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Originally Posted by novaheaven
Likin this one indeed, much more dynamic and full. Keep going!
Thanks mah man.
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Originally Posted by Mint
I think you have a real talent with details - for example; Lightning in Snow's Pain. Keep working on using and improving details in your drawings and you'll be able to create some really impressive pictures (: It sure does require a lot of patience though
In Out Of The Woods your colouring and shading has already improved a lot; looks awesome. Shading is one of the most important factors to memorable art, and it can really help to set the mood in it.
Thanks. I Like details, pictures feel empty without them. And I see what you mean about the shading as Out Of The Woods has turned out to be my favourite piece. And I gotta say it wouldn't have looked like that without the suggestions from noveheaven and Ordella.
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Originally Posted by Pupucachi
Snow's pain ♥♥♥
Hahaha, poor face xD. That one is a brilliant one!!!
Good thing I put it up then, because I really weren't planning to
oh and thanks.
I know this is double posting, but I thought it would be expectable in this situation.
If not, ops...
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and another version
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Behind The Mask
I watched The Imaginarium of Dr. Parnassus, and afterwords I felt afterwords like drawing a guy with a mask, so I did.
Originally I was going to have him in a black coat, but I liked this better.
I'm really diggin the character design, it's so cool with the grinning mask and with one eye exposed like that.
Nice color choices too.
Tho if there's one thing holding you back atm to me, it's the lighting in your drawings. Your shading is not bad, but is a tad flat. Some more contrast would do you some good.
Taking the time to experiment with lighting moods can really add to an already great drawing. Or even add more depth to a drawing or character.
I'm really diggin the character design, it's so cool with the grinning mask and with one eye exposed like that.
Nice color choices too.
Thanks, I thought so too
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Originally Posted by novaheaven
Tho if there's one thing holding you back atm to me, it's the lighting in your drawings. Your shading is not bad, but is a tad flat. Some more contrast would do you some good.
Originally Posted by novaheaven
I'm really diggin the character design, it's so cool with the grinning mask and with one eye exposed like that.
Nice color choices too.
nova heaven is entitled to his opinion. if he likes it than good for him, but i think your character design sucks balls. i mean can you be more unoriginal? plus you dont have any artistic skills. give it up sally.
My design cannot suck balls as it has no mouth to do it with. If you want to make an insult do it right.
A good insult would go like this; Your character design couldn't be worse if it was drawn by a paralysed person with no fingers and sores for eyes.
And yes, my designs could be more unoriginal; I could just not make my own characters.
Now, if you want to insult me come up with something better.
My design cannot suck balls as it has no mouth to do it with. If you want to make an insult do it right.
A good insult would go like this; Your character design couldn't be worse if it was drawn by a paralysed person with no fingers and sores for eyes.
And yes, my designs could be more unoriginal; I could just not make my own characters.
Now, if you want to insult me come up with something better.
guess what........................
i just double posted. suck on that.
btw to an artist being unoriginal is a quite a big insult.
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And who are you do decide what I should be insulted by?
cause im the guy you went all anal on and told not to double post. does your life suck so bad that you have to pick on peoples small mistakes in order to make it feel like you have power or control in your life? ive also noticed you did that to someone else. man you are thick headed.
hmmm.... all anal on, thick headed. i think this might be one of the gayest post ive ever made. wait now it is #1.
You really felt so offended by my telling you not to double post that you had to find a thread I made, and make dumb witted attempts to insult me?
Now let me tell you a little fun fact: If I or anyone else don't tell you not to double post and a moderator happens to be in a bad mode when they see it, they can give you a 2 point warning.
You get enough of those and you'll get suspended.
If I every made the mistake I would expect people to call me on it.
And really how "anal" and "thick headed" is;
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Originally Posted by Glacies
^don't double post, If you want to add something use the button.
I mean really?
But if you're not satisfied with this you could always make a hate thread, there you and other members who don't like me can come together and make fun of me.
my point is that i didnt need you to tell me. a moderrator should do that if that is their job. if it doesnt bother them or they dont see it then whats the big deal? im unaware of this point thing. it would be gay to get booted for double posting. even in general it would be gay to get the boot. people are gathered here to talk about what they like, what they dont like, have a laugh, bust chops agree and disagree. who is someone to tell me i cant? unless someone threatens another person then i understand the boot. i hate when someone who has a sucky life has a little "power" and they abuse it for no other reason than having a bad day. i hope none of the moderators are that way here.
if you couldnt tell i was more or less busting you chops. i was just trying to get a rise out of you. i ment no harm. your drwings do suck though lol.
Hey c'mon you two. This is an art appreciating and critiquing thread ain't it?
CrazyRayZ, if you can't add some type of positive crit on how you think he can improve, then you don't have to comment at all if you hate it. Simple as that.
Does your life suck so bad that you have to pick a fight over the internet because you were told the right thing to do?
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oh snap a real life psychic. damn you are good. thats crazy you know all about my life and what my intentions are. im going go eat my hot pocket now. then go play with my cat. maybe later organize my star wars collection.
you suck and mind your own buisness.
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wait now it is #1.
button.
you suck and mind your own buisness.
