new sig 3

[Misschoco]

i'v yet again done another sig. hope you like it the borders a bit faint but you can just about see it. theres 2 versions please tell me which is better

sig 1


sig 2

[Omni-Cloud]

I would go with the first one. The grey strip in the second sig makes it slightly difficult to read.

That's my choice XD Good job btw.

[Misschoco]

Originally Posted by Omni-Cloud

I would go with the first one. The grey strip in the second sig makes it slightly difficult to read.

thanks^

im not sure about the grey strip

[Kitmitsu]

Nice sig I should really watch the rest of Ergo Proxy. Good job!

[Askyria]

Ooh, nice. I like the first one more too. The thing is, I don't really like how the girl and the chaotic render-y like thing don't really fit together well...like, the render thing caught my eye first, rather than the girl, which I think was your main focus.

I'm not too sure about your text, the font looks kinda...overly drippy? Dunno.

Lovelovelovelove your avatar though.

[Misschoco]

Originally Posted by Askyria

Ooh, nice.
I'm not too sure about your text, the font looks kinda...overly drippy? Dunno.

Lovelovelovelove your avatar though.

thanks. considering the text i changed it slightly to make it less drippy by applying wind filter to the top aswell



better???

[Askyria]

Aaah, I think I like your first version better. It's kinda hard to read now, lol. I'd go with something easy and clean...

...like Garamond...XD

[Yurian]

That looks awesome Choco

I'm not sure about the pairing between the render and the background - they're fighting for attention. I'm also not sure about how I would fix that. Perhaps it looks good that way

Hehe...I like her blue eye shadowing. (shadowing? right word? I don't know anything about make-up...well...why should I?)

[Misschoco]

Originally Posted by Yurian

Hehe...I like her blue eye shadowing. (shadowing? right word? I don't know anything about make-up...well...why should I?)

thanks

by the way its eye shadow lol

iv tried to make to girl more of a focal point(sigs below) their either better or incredibly crap. please tell me lol

in this sig i blurred the background render to make the girl more of a focal point (hope it worked)

in this sig i moved to girl more towards the center and gave a faint red hue to the background

[Yurian]

I liked the original composition more. Good idea on blurring the background, maybe darkening it too? Just an idea, but how about blowing up the font, and moving it down to the center of the image so that it's a title, but also a pointer towards the render.

[Misschoco]

Originally Posted by Yurian

I liked the original composition more. Good idea on blurring the background, maybe darkening it too? Just an idea, but how about blowing up the font, and moving it down to the center of the image so that it's a title, but also a pointer towards the render.

hmmm is this what you mean????

[Misschoco]

i also need opinions on the border xD^^^(pic above)