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Old Nov 03 2009, 02:49 PM   #1
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Default The Lightning That Crosses The Cloud...

i've always wanted to be in a fansite. it's really great but... yeah... you can't always have whatever you want all at one right? XD

ok ok, this one is a crossover of Lightning from FFXIII and Cloud Strife from FFVII AC. But in this, Lightning did not have amnesia, but she hates to use her name because of a hidden past. her sister, Serah Farron (which also appears in the FFXIII game) was kidnapped, or rather, taken, by a mysterious energy that was not related to the Cocoon, Pulse, Materia, or Lifestream. she lives on top of Ardora Mourette (my OC)'s flower shop and rent the flat. Snow, Vanille and Hope shall be shown later. but this is not the story yet. i'll have to write it down first before i can type anything... best way to avoid grammar errors.

p/s: this happens after FFVII: AC Movie. Lightning and Cloud shall be 21 in age too. please post any ideas to me cuz i ran out of 'em for the second chapter of this!
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Old Nov 03 2009, 03:03 PM   #2
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ah? fanfic?
it sounds.. kinda nice
and the title. xD
But.. Lightning never had an amnesia. Well from what I can understand and remember and after reading the translated web novel. She discarded the name given by her parents so that she can become an "adult".
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Old Nov 03 2009, 05:43 PM   #3
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^^ Yeah, around the time her name was revealed (Lightning) they said she had Amnesia and that she couldn't remember her name, and that she was popular for the citizens because she was the leader of a lot of rebellions. I guess the plot wasn't completely finished around that time

Anyway, great story but you wrote Sarah Farron instead of sErah Farron in your username.
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Old Nov 03 2009, 05:55 PM   #4
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^^ Oh, I didn't know the leader of the rebellion part. Yeah, maybe the plot isn't really finished by that time.

I don't think Sarah_Farron_XIII username is mispelled. She did spell Serah correctly. Plus her siggy.
maybe it's referring to something else, or Lightning's real name w/c is not revealed yet. Since it's close to Serah and they are sisters.

Idea.. hmm.. maybe I'll wait until you write down the first chapter :3
And what's the reason why Serah is kidnapped?
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Old Nov 04 2009, 02:52 AM   #5
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p/s: this happens after FFVII: AC Movie. Lightning and Cloud shall be 21 in age too.
How are they both 21 when Cloud is 23 in Advent Children? And then what about Dirge of Cerberus? Does this take place in between AC and DoC, which is one year after AC?
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Old Nov 04 2009, 03:17 AM   #6
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I think i might read this, got no ideas though lol
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