Somnus (poem)

[lungy1225]

This is one of my poem and is my first post. >.<
Somnus
if you ask who am i,
i am the person who watch you die.
the painful song sing in my heartless life,
with the sadness story i tell no lies.
the song you sang me is the song of death,
i will be waiting......
waiting to sleep and die.

[V.Anaya]

This is one of my poem and is my first post. >.<
Somnus
if you ask who am i,
i am the person who watch you die.
the painful song sing in my heartless life,
with the sadness story i tell no lies.
the song you sang me is the song of death,
i will be waiting......
waiting to sleep and die.


Ahem...:|

This is the poem.

If you ask who I am,
I am the one who watches you die.
This painful song that plays in my heartless life.
With this sad story, I tell no lies.
The song you sung to me is the song of death.
I will be waiting...
Waiting to sleep and die.

:wtf:
I dont' get it. Though, it's puzzled.

[lungy1225]

sorry about the grammar -.-
friend had pointed out this mistakes but i forgot to change it

[lungy1225]

please reply even if it is bad comment
i want to see that can i write stuff.

[meteor]

Eternal wait for something to come,
eternal wait for something to be,
seasons change and years pass by,
there's nothing in the distance to see.
From gold to silver and from wealthy to less,
can i be happy without?
Is that the thing life is about?

[lungy1225]

Eternal wait for something to come,
eternal wait for something to be,
seasons change and years pass by,
there's notting in the distance to see.
From gold to silver and from wealthy to less,
can i be happy without?
Is that the thing life is about?

i can tell alittle of what you trying to say
but still thanks ^_^
i believe that i know what to do now:)