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RueLi
Jul 20 2009, 06:01 AM
Hey guys,
I did some fanart of Noctis as a print for Anime Expo 2009.
But because of time restraints, a lot of things were rushed and I personally wasn't completely satisfied with the final piece.
(But content enough to present it as a print)
I'd like to improve on this print,
so constructive criticize/critique is very much wanted!

*His left hand will DEFINITELY be redone!
He was supposed to be holding his weapon...but the time just flew by and I didn't get to it....

http://i653.photobucket.com/albums/uu259/lizchanfish/FFXIII_Versus___Noctis_by_RueLi.jpg
Cardin
Jul 20 2009, 06:19 AM
needs more overdramatic magic symbols.

and that body is toooooooo slim :\

buff up his stomach. and chest.

other than that pretty amazing!
rutea7
Jul 20 2009, 07:34 AM
it's really good, keep it up

when u include the weapon repost it so we can see the improvement
TheKyleWins
Jul 20 2009, 08:47 AM
Some parts of the body are a tad off-proportion, the neck for example is a tad too thick at the top, and the chest and shoulders could be wider. Other than that it's excellent.
Ahmadhelld
Jul 20 2009, 12:25 PM
Not bad!
Few things and it will be very good.
Devegas
Jul 20 2009, 03:20 PM
yeah, just give him a bit more and he'll be fine, but it does look awesome
Ridiculous5991
Jul 20 2009, 03:50 PM
i like it but i do think he is a lil to skinny looking. His clothes don't look like they fit but everything else i love good job
Entonations
Jul 20 2009, 05:12 PM
I like the style a lot its different
Astraia
Jul 21 2009, 01:29 PM
Hey, good job! Plus the colouring is nice. :)

...the arms are way too big for his torso, though. Try to make his upper body a little bit bigger.
lightning.versus.xiii
Jul 21 2009, 01:34 PM
o yeah the text should read "Final Fantasy Versus XIII" - not final fantasy xiii versus.
Final Twilight
Jul 22 2009, 01:00 AM
You wanna teach me how to draw, lol
Just kidding, but i really like it. how you do you do coloring?
RueLi
Jul 22 2009, 07:20 AM
You wanna teach me how to draw, lol
Just kidding, but i really like it. how you do you do coloring?

Lines were sketched traditionally.
Clean lineart and colors were done on Photoshop CS using a Cintiq tablet.
Donflamingo
Jul 22 2009, 08:33 AM
What the hell are you all commenting on? :O I can't see any picture here, doesn't even show a "Can't load" pic sign or anything :( I wanna see
You're not Here
Jul 22 2009, 09:35 AM
Give the man a sandwich!!!


It's good though :)
RueLi
Jul 22 2009, 06:28 PM
What the hell are you all commenting on? :O I can't see any picture here, doesn't even show a "Can't load" pic sign or anything :( I wanna see

http://i653.photobucket.com/albums/uu259/lizchanfish/FFXIII_Versus___Noctis_by_RueLi.jpg

here's the direct link
FROG
Jul 22 2009, 07:41 PM
I think it looks really good, although it could have that more dark feel, that versus has ^^
Maybe a little more detail on the clothing or so.
But it looks great xP
purplezebra
Jul 23 2009, 07:47 PM
The colors don't make it feel like Noctis, not dark enough.
I do like your art though. I don't like his nose.
purplezebra
Jul 23 2009, 07:47 PM
The colors don't make it feel like Noctis, not dark enough.
I do like your art though. I don't like his nose.