Final Fantasy X-2 - The version with less fail

[You're not Here]

Well, seeing as how FFX was completely butchered by the sequel, I decided to pull a story out of my own ass, which I don't think would be as bad as the one from the game.



-FINAL FANTASY X-2-
as written by You're Not Here








Chapter One: Aftermath


"The people and the friends that we have lost, and the dreams that have faded... Never forget them."


It had been almost three years since she had uttered those words.
They had been true, echoing from her heart, and heard by the people of Spira.

They had to remember, because the past was impossible to forget;

Sin.
Destruction.
The Spiral of death.
Loss.


More importantly, the loss of her love. A young man, who had claimed to be from the ruined city Zanarkand had taken her heart. He had been there when her faith had been shaken, when she was ready to give her life away. But he wouldn't have it, because he loved her.

Only, when her duty as a summoner was fulfilled, he dissapeared.
He had been a dream; a beautiful dream.
But ever since he had left, her life had been nothing but a nightmare.


Her days were spent in the small town of Besaid.
She had become a heroine for what she had done. the people of Spira traveled from far and wide just to get a glimpse of her, or to shake her hand.
But all she wanted was them to leave her alone.

She could not bear smiling anymore.
She didn't want to pretend that she was happy.


That was why the day that her cousin Rikku came, telling about the
changes that had transformed Spira she did not look back before she climbed aboard her airship in the darkest night.


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Author's notes:
um, i could write the backstory, but since SE didn't, why the hell should I?!
Anyway...


*Yuna is clinically depressed OH NOES!

*Lulu killed herself (she ran out of belts).
Wakka joined the circus.


* There's gonna be alot more change in Spira, you'll just have to wait and see.

[mercy0001]

Couldn't you just write it ON your ass?

[meteor]

Couldn't you just write it ON your ass?

Then let someone paint that and call it art.

[You're not Here]

Couldn't you just write it ON your ass?

Deal or GTFO

:cathryn:



Chappy 2 coming soon!

[mercy0001]

YAY, I'm looking forward to chapter 2! This one was soo good!
Well written!

*cough*

I do not want to insult you, but there are specific sites for stories like these. This is a forum, and I think some of you don't really know the meaning of a forum... Never had history lessons?

And yeah, nice avatar (Reminds me somehow of Yamada Ryosuke...)

[You're not Here]

^ it IS a writing forum, and this is writing.


My avatar is the artwork of Alessa Gillespie from Silent Hill.

[Moklin]

I liked it, im waiting for chapter 2.

Maybe this ll help me to surpass my x-2´s trauma. Every singletime i look at Vannile i remenber YRP. :=

[Kurai Warrior]

YAY, I'm looking forward to chapter 2! This one was soo good!
Well written!

*cough*

I do not want to insult you, but there are specific sites for stories like these. This is a forum, and I think some of you don't really know the meaning of a forum... Never had history lessons?

And yeah, nice avatar (Reminds me somehow of Yamada Ryosuke...)

Wow Mercy, I think you're the one who forgot what a forum is. Most forums have sections for design, art, writing, and graphics. :cookie:
Is this forum that twisted that you can't post fan fics in writing sections? XD
Sure some of them aren't good fan fics, but it's still writing.

[Sodedicated]

Lol and the critics come out

[meteor]

I think its a little depressing.

[mercy0001]

Wow Mercy, I think you're the one who forgot what a forum is. Most forums have sections for design, art, writing, and graphics. :cookie:
Is this forum that twisted that you can't post fan fics in writing sections? XD
Sure some of them aren't good fan fics, but it's still writing.

I just had a bad day...

[Emo Panda]

Everyone dies. The end.

[Lord Of Dumbasses]

I just had a bad day...

Sex resolves it. Simple and clean.

[Astraia]

*Yuna is clinically depressed OH NOES!


....i want her to curl up and die.

[jinotokyo]

If Lulu is going to die, thats just an epic FAILURE. But in terms of the main story, it's pretty good. Hopefully there isn't any of that gay-ass GIRL POWER later on.

[Astraia]

big bewbed wimmin must always have the right to survive.

[Sodedicated]

Have them become a military-minded asexual trio

No whining about them being sluts or aimless airheads

[Devegas]

turn them into cold-blooded killers. yuna's need for revenge comes in the form of murdering the leblanc syndicate, guado genocide, and abusing the airheads

[Sodedicated]

That could work too

And reinvent Vegnagun as something badass, not this giant gay insect robot thing

[You're not Here]

A/N: No, I wasn't serious in the previous author's notes. So that means
*Lulu is not dead ...yet (mwahaha! Nah, I like Lulu :D )
* Wakka doesn't join the circus, even if he should
* Yuna is not clinically depressed
Anyway, here goes number two. critics are welcome, but due to my awesomeness, I'm sure I'll only get compliments :).
The chapter is supposed to be longer, but i guess I'll post that in a bit.
　
　
Chapter 2. Changes
　
　
　
　
I woke up during the morning, after being shaken away by eager hands.
"Yunie, we're here!" Rikku announced.
"Already?" I said, my eyes adjusting to the bright light flooding in from the window.
"You'd be surprised how fast this airship can go" she said with a wink. I smiled.
She sure was happy of having her own ship. "Meet me outside when you're ready. I left some clothes for you
in the cabin, since your duds won't do." With that, she raced outside faster than you could say Chocobo.
She had changed a bit ever since the calm arrived; her childish attidude, while present, didn't make itself known to anyone
who was around. She was growing up, so it was natural that it would happen. Of course, I thought it had to do with what she
was up to these days.
Years ago, Rikku and a handful of Al bhed would go out to sea in hopes of finding ancient machina
that could be salvaged and used. The activity was the same; seeking machina, though now with Sin gone,
the research could be conducted almost anywhere in the world. Thanks to this, she had been able to find her own airship, as well as other machina
that she and the Al bhed would use to help in different places. This was what was going to be done today.
　
I got up, stiff after sleeping on a chair for the whole night and made my way to the cabin.
I wondered where the clothes were, until a helpful al bhed man led me to a resting area.
I really wished to have practiced the language, since I could only understand a bit now.
A row of beds greeted me, and on top of one there was a very... interesting outfit.
It looked like a bunch of pieces at first sight. I stayed there for a couple minutes, trying to figure out
how to exactly piece it all together, until something in my brain clicked. I hurried to the bathroom, and
put the clothes on. I stared in the mirror, gazing at a familiar looking stranger.
Her eyes were like mine, her lips, her face, her hair... though her appearence was more fit for someone
who worked several hours in the hot sun. The long, blue pants that hugged my legs felt odd, and the short sleeved
white and red shirt I wore fitted a bit too tightly. I felt uncomfortable, but I was sure my long dress wouldn't be appropiate.
I stared at it, crumpled on the floor...
　
My boots hit the warm sand of the desert, and I had to gain my composture.
I forgot how tedious getting off an airship actually was.Rikku looked suprised when she saw me.
"You look so good, Yuna!"
Though her smile faded as my lack of joy showed.
"Oh, what's wrong?" she asked me with a hint of annoyance.
"I just... don't feel like me." I said. " I know this is a new start, but I'm not comfortable dressing in so little."
"Well, we ARE in the desert, you know" she explained. " I don't want you tripping over things, much less to where we're going!"
"And where is that?"
Rikku grabbed my hand and pulled me along with a giggle.
"You're just about to find out!
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* btw, yuna's outfit (yes, i suxx at drawing, so what?)
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7153/lolzyuna.png

Any ideas or comments, say them here!

[Devegas]

alright addition but, um............................... i thought you'd turn her evil

[You're not Here]

^ It's my story, I do whatever the fuck I want!

But she is going to be less of a wimp and shit... you'll just have to see that kick in when the Youth League parts enter the storyline.

[Devegas]

alright you better then but then again anything is better than the game itself

[You're not Here]

^ Sad, but true.