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Vtks
Jun 22 2009, 06:45 PM
well, it seems that i make sigs very bad because in that contest i told you last time i presented this:

http://i323.photobucket.com/albums/nn455/twilinacho/NoctisLucisCaelum-2.png


but users, in that forum found this, cooler:

http://i323.photobucket.com/albums/nn455/twilinacho/untitled.jpg


but, tell me what'ch think . . .

Kätharina
Jun 22 2009, 07:05 PM
Thats because the blending and contrast was completely meh in the first.
The second is alot more appealing to the eye, still needs a bit more work though.

1nOnly
Jun 22 2009, 07:27 PM
i actually like the first one more but the other one looks less typical and more FF-ish (IMO)

Saiyora-Saga
Jun 22 2009, 08:12 PM
Very pretty. ^^ I like them.

Falsate
Jun 23 2009, 12:06 AM
Not much of a fan of grunge period...Can be improved in many ways especially the first one.

Pixel
Jun 23 2009, 12:42 AM
well, it seems that i make sigs very bad because in that contest i told you last time i presented this:

http://i323.photobucket.com/albums/nn455/twilinacho/NoctisLucisCaelum-2.png


but users, in that forum found this, cooler:

http://i323.photobucket.com/albums/nn455/twilinacho/untitled.jpg


but, tell me what'ch think . . .

You put too much stuff in the first one. Just the prince and the soldiers would have been enough. I would have moved the prince all the way to the left, then put the soldiers in.

Plus, the text was unnecesseary. IMO text usually ruins any sig, it even looks bad in the chosen winner.

Fenryr
Jun 23 2009, 10:14 AM
Your first signature lacks depth, especially on Noctis. Considering he's the main focus of the signature it's a shame he's entirely blended into the background. You would of done better to apply some of your own lighting onto his stock from there and pull certain parts of him toward the viewer. The text seems a little redundant. Text can either make or break your signature, and in this case it breaks it. The lion symbol in the bottom right seems slightly out of place, this might just be personal taste, but it also seems to conflict with any sort of depth you could of achieved wonderfully.

The second one is much softer. I would of prefferred to see sharper detailed blade on the left, as the soft blurred effect makes it look out of place. Great color work, it blends perfectly yet does not detract any value from the main stock (through the facial colors which bring her away from the rest of the picture, further bringing Lightning towards your focus). Once again, text either makes or breaks, and in this instance I think the text absolutely makes the signature. Without it, it would miss that little 'umph' and toss the signature toward the more mundane crowd.

With that said, if some aspects of the first were different to what you show here, then I would of found myself leaning more towards that one. But in this instance I'm inclined to say I prefer the second more.

Ivan
Jun 23 2009, 12:20 PM
there are too many elements on the first one. it looks 'busy.' the text also kinda ruined it. Still, i like yours better than the second one.

1nOnly
Jun 24 2009, 01:41 AM
would be nice if you put the sig's back?