CG project. FFVXIII "tired Prince"

[Ookami-Herutsu]

Yea i know! the eyes are messed! the tracing is B A D!!!! but thats all becuase i dont have a tablet anymore so i had to mouse it. Anyways ill fix it up sooner or later! anyways PLZ critizise my work. I really need it cuz i wont know where to improve myself!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/DualFace/Artprogress02.jpg

-Ookami Herutsu

[Pulse]

Shading on the clothing is amazing. Stunning actually, but the outline is okay for a mouse effort. Get the tablet fixed and then repost your work. I am sure it will be much better.

Josh

[Enedok]

I'm astunned by the kewl work on clothes so we only miss the same shading on his face arms and shoes. A background would be cool too.

[Yurian]

Nice start ookami :)

The things I'm a bit iffy about are that the legs seem a bit long in comparison to the torso. Also, if you're considering to add some sort of background - maybe even just a gradient, you may want to tone it now or add some basic colors. Right now you're using a white background, which makes the character seem darker - it may become more difficult to determine the background later after you've detailed the entire character. Unless you want to keep the background white.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to this :) Keep up the good work! Get some blues in there!

[Inferno187]

I'm astunned by the kewl work on clothes so we only miss the same shading on his face arms and shoes. A background would be cool too.

I agree. The shading on the clothes is awesome, but you still need to work on the boots, arms, legs and face. But as you said urself its only 45% complete so I'm looking forward to seeing your final version ^_^

[Xion]

very nice, its not CG BTW(CG is computer generated), its considered artwork :P