Rock your socks

[Misschoco]

.........The name for this new piece (thread title btw)

Just to prove that im still alive and posting heres my first post for quite some while.

Mkay so this is my 2nd attempt so far at crappy cell shading etc in photoshop.Its fanart for a character in JSRF btw.Only gots meself a tablet 3 days ago :aldo:

Her eyes look dead and the skates are terrible (in terms of shading and sketching)

Got myself a new deviant art btw :aldo: theres hardly any artwork on it because im a lazy betch and most things I do are crap
http://ssaskies.deviantart.com/
Constructive critism please :cookie:

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs28/f/2008/172/2/9/Rock_your_socks_by_Ssaskies.jpg

[Rade]

Ooh very nice :aldo: I actually have no criticism other than maybe try and make the lineart less rough before you colour it, but maybe that's just your style.

[Kitmitsu]

I think the skates look fine :P I think it looks really good. The only suggestion I have is possibly neatening up the lines. Thing is, I get lazy and try and use Illustrator to draw lines over sketches for me and just edit the mess it causes.

[Pixel]

Looks fine. XD

I kinda like the llines all messy like that. 0.0

[Tina]

I like the rough lines, maybe you can roughen it up even more to bring out action.
One thing I would have liked to see would be better hair :aldo: something that might flow in the wind //
But overall I think you did a great job - we're getting a tablet soon too :3

[Misschoco]

Meh...thankies to all:aldo:^^
Ooh very nice :aldo: I actually have no criticism other than maybe try and make the lineart less rough before you colour it, but maybe that's just your style.
..........The rough lines were left there on purpose-I dont like neat lineart.:rolleyes:

I like the rough lines, maybe you can roughen it up even more to bring out action.
One thing I would have liked to see would be better hair :aldo: something that might flow in the wind //
But overall I think you did a great job - we're getting a tablet soon too :3

This was my reference picture-so I sort of hand to do her hair like that :aldo:
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4342/jsrfmewjv9.jpg