THE VERSUS DUDE REMINDS ME OF THE MALE LEAD IN MY STORY!!

[Chick]

Bye Bye!!!!!!

[Naunen]

What the hell's up with the title? o_o How do we know that you haven't just created a character like him after Nomura first touched mechanical pencil to his concept? :shifty: We hardly know the Prince as is. >.>

Love the paragraph structure and the lively dialogue, by the way. =D

[Chick]

What the hell's up with the title? o_o How do we know that you haven't just created a character like him after Nomura first touched mechanical pencil to his concept? :shifty: We hardly know the Prince as is. >.>

Love the paragraph structure and the lively dialogue, by the way. =D


You have a point, but I AM being honest. His character only REMINDS me of my own. I know the prince is pretty much a mystery, but the things we DO know about him are a bit similar to my character's. I'll probably see some major differences as more info is released about the prince. And about the title...if you're talking about my story's title, it's not exactly the "real" one. It's sort of a placeholder.

Oh! And thanks for the compliment! :D

[Naunen]

You have a point, but I AM being honest. His character only REMINDS me of my own. I know the prince is pretty much a mystery, but the things we DO know about him are a bit similar to my character's. I'll probably see some major differences as more info is released about the prince. And about the title...if you're talking about my story's title, it's not exactly the "real" one. It's sort of a placeholder (it sounds corny, I KNOW).

Oh! And thanks for the compliment! :D

----Oh, I meant the thread title. No prob. It's hard to pinpoint exactly when Nomura started the designs anyway considering we've been knowing about FNC since 2006 or so.

[Chick]

----Oh, I meant the thread title. No prob. It's hard to pinpoint exactly when Nomura started the designs anyway considering we've been knowing about FNC since 2006 or so.

The thread title? Oh! I guess it IS pretty weird! :P Well, I didn't really know much about FFXIII until like a year ago, so I'm even MORE clueless. Either way, I bet the characters in all three games will be incredible!

[Pulse]

Your sentence structure is excellent, you could have gotten away with not using the red font, had it not annoyed the fuck out of me that someone else does it lol. And its become annoying. lol. Other than that welcome to the forum, keep posting your work, I like what I see.

Joshx

[Chick]

Your sentence structure is excellent, you could have gotten away with not using the red font, had it not annoyed the fuck out of me that someone else does it lol. And its become annoying. lol. Other than that welcome to the forum, keep posting your work, I like what I see.

Joshx

Thank you! But would you prefer pink font, though? Or maybe orange? Maybe just white! ^_^

[Pulse]

Its best to stick with just white haha.

[SirBaron]

I like it. The setting with the advanced cities and undeveloped rural areas reminds me a little of my own story, actually. It's cool that you haven't done a Tolkien like most fresh authors do. Keep up the good work! :P

Edit: Btw, are you going to publish your work by any chance?

[Chick]

I like it. The setting with the advanced cities and undeveloped rural areas reminds me a little of my own story, actually. It's cool that you haven't done a Tolkien like most fresh authors do. Keep up the good work! :P

Edit: Btw, are you going to publish your work by any chance?

Thanks! I haven't really thought about publishing, though. I probably won't finish writing it until I'm out of high school! I'll just wait and see...

[Kurai Warrior]

see the only thing about telling us that your character is a lot like the Prince in final fantasy versus XIII, when i read the chapter of your story (which was awesome by the way) I kept imagining Xero as the Prince in Versus, XD. It was really well written, and i like it :)

[Chick]

see the only thing about telling us that your character is a lot like the Prince in final fantasy versus XIII, when i read the chapter of your story (which was awesome by the way) I kept imagining Xero as the Prince in Versus, XD. It was really well written, and i like it :)

Thank you! But I'm not so sure that they're similar anymore. The more I keep learing about the prince, the more differences I see. Xero is a bit lanky...and I don't really see that in the prince. I imagine Xero's hair much different, too. :nod:

[Sadistic]

Dann, I have the same problem as you do. I've just finished a novel, and Lightning bears a striking resemblence to my heroine, Naela. Somewhat ironically, The Prince reminds me of my story's antagonist, Larcer. I came up with my characters far before I knew about Final Fantasy XIII, and I'm now in the midst of a sequel. Also, you have some talent there ^_^ Keep it up. I've been writing at a proffesional level for years, but you can't tell unless you read my material.