I drown, I drown [poetry]

[Draike]

Fore note- Yeah, I was having a good day until something happened. Sorry if it is too long or you don't like it. I do enjoy criticism still though; I want to get better.

Take my hand
I'm breaking down
these bullets are flying
They hit you all around

I'll take your hand
let us run around through this
we have to go
the bullets fly

I wish so hard
I wish you live
I wish I die
You deserve to live
I deserve to die.

I can't take this pain
you always put me through
I try and try
you cry and cry
I do my best
it isn't enough
you push me away
its always the exact same way

I try I try
you cry you cry
I do my best
I try I try
For, dear, I love you
whether you love me back
this unrequited love
it is such a pain
just strike me down
slice my throat
fucking rape me
slit my wrists
black my eyes
stab my heart
shoot me down

All I can do is watch myself drown
in this pool blood you put me in

[OmiVersusXIV]

Damn thats deep draike very good.