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AT23
Mar 12 2008, 06:20 AM
Something I drew at work with a 15 minute limit (since my boss likes to make frequent checks with his employees lol >.>;;) I used some crummy pencil they have available to the public, a small piece of paper the size of an index card, or basically scratch paper for again, the public... it's rough, but as you can tell my style is heavily influenced by Tetsuya Nomura. The picture of this drawing turned out weird, I'm guessing the setting of the camera and the fact that graphite goes all shiny with a flash distorted the dark areas into shiny whites. Critiques welcome, enjoy!

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg225/UltimateWeirdo23/Doodle-1.jpg

Naunen
Mar 12 2008, 06:33 AM
The ear looks odd and the shoulder looks a little small but other than that, it's all good. O_O I suck with critiquing and I can't draw for shit anyway compared to realistic styles. :'(

OmiVersusXIV
Mar 12 2008, 06:49 AM
Something I drew at work with a 15 minute limit (since my boss likes to make frequent checks with his employees lol >.>;;) I used some crummy pencil they have available to the public, a small piece of paper the size of an index card, or basically scratch paper for again, the public... it's rough, but as you can tell my style is heavily influenced by Tetsuya Nomura. The picture of this drawing turned out weird, I'm guessing the setting of the camera and the fact that graphite goes all shiny with a flash distorted the dark areas into shiny whites. Critiques welcome, enjoy!

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg225/UltimateWeirdo23/Doodle-1.jpg

Great job on it really unique to me.

AT23
Mar 12 2008, 07:00 AM
Thank you for the crits and comments Naunen and Omi!

Yes, I agree the ears are placed a bit too far back, and I didn't quite capture the inner structure of the ear... but if you were wondering what those weird little bumps were to the side and on her lobe, they're earrings, 3 total... one on the lobe, 2 on different places of the cartilage. I will try to not minimize the shoulders as well, I suck at drawing girls actually, and when I try to emphasize the difference between males and females I sometimes try too hard... in this case I think I tried to avoid the shoulders being broad like a man's lol x.x But it ended up too small ; ; Anyways thanks again! ^^

Jive Turkey
Mar 12 2008, 08:16 AM
When I see or hear "doodle" I think of a stick figure or something like that

Nice doodle AT :]

BUTTCHEEKIES, OOH
Mar 12 2008, 09:49 AM
Aw, what a cute girl ~ it's a shame the reflection interfered when you took the photo, it's a bit disturbing. Lovely drawing still. <3

Amleya
Mar 12 2008, 10:45 AM
Ooh, you draw hard into the paper too? I do that a lot >.>; I need to stop http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f345/Kamoohiyazada/FatChocobo.gif Pretty good doodle :P I don't doodle at all anymore ; ; Last time I did was at a funeral home e.e

estella
Mar 12 2008, 11:40 AM
aww aweomse

u know one thing id pick on is her mouth whch is slightly too low

but other than that <3

AT23
Mar 12 2008, 07:58 PM
Egad, you're right her mouth is too low, I'm seeing that it's higher in all of the characters designs done by Nomura now... must fix! XD

Misschoco
Mar 12 2008, 10:34 PM
lol doodle would be an understatement <3 This drawing is awesome :cookie:

AT23
Mar 13 2008, 03:07 AM
Thanks Estella and MissChoco! ^^

2nd drawing coming soon, done in 25 minutes, I will post it once I get home in about 3 hours...

Edit: Here it is. Sorry for being late, went out on a drive with a friend. This one proved to be a difficult one, there are so many errors on it that it makes baby Jesus cry. Well, it seems like she turned out to be a mix between Squall, Tidus, and Paine (FF8, FF10, FF10-2 respectively). I hope you all like it, she has a huge, scary smile to give you all nightmares. Also, be on the lookout for my serious drawing (not a doodle) codenamed "Project: Versus".

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg225/UltimateWeirdo23/DSC00412-1.jpg

Misschoco
Mar 13 2008, 08:44 PM
No wai-Her hair is awesome and the rendering is sugoi<3

Naunen
Mar 14 2008, 07:23 AM
You do all the hair with careful detail. T_T