graphic project-grunge

[Misschoco]

okay i incredibly suck at designing stuff on photoshop-i lack a creative streak.Heres something i made for a graphics project-its for a p.o.s display for a made up game...im not entirely happy with it though,maybe cuz im an idiot-but im wondering what improvements i could make to it-its either pretty crap or okay

constructive feedback would be good.be nice :rolleyes:

http://aycu30.webshots.com/image/37509/2006044816728111144_fs.jpg

[Aquaman]

I like it.

[Whiplash]

I like it but not the text, it's too all-in-a-straight-line to really work as grunge and the font doesn't work either. Rest of it is good though.

[Yurian]

Woah! I haven't seen you for a while misschoco. :D

Great textures! Yeah! Is there a reason for the blank space underneath the text? Maybe including some very faint colors (reds, browns, dirty yellows) in a new layer set on soft light?

[Misschoco]

@whiplash-i agree about the text i'll try changing the text-or give up and leave it

@yurian-long time no see :) to be honest i dont know why i left that space blank i wasnt entirely sure on how to fill it-i'll put your advice into practice but i doubt i can make it turn out good.

before i'v actually put everyones opinion into action-i'v darkened the bit with the skull and cross vastly-im just wondering if that section looks better darker or lighter

after
http://aycu11.webshots.com/image/40370/2000670128355911262_fs.jpg

[Misschoco]

sorry for double post-but i'v actually finished the point of sale with my design on it

http://aycu17.webshots.com/image/41176/2003465803901663755_fs.jpg

http://aycu21.webshots.com/image/41300/2003404788762462044_fs.jpg


sooo what does everyone think?????


btw:i still havent completely stuck the middle bit to the sides properly yet-i'll get to that soon