Ozonez first review

[ozonez]

Well ive wrote my first game review like last week and just wondered what it was like and shit:

http://ozonez.gametrailers.com/gamepad/index.php?action=viewreview&id=38343

Its for Heavenly Sword becoz i thought that game was amazing, currently writing one for COD4.

[Desi]

All your ratings are too high except for replayability, which so happens to be too low.

[Whiplash]

You've also made a few punctuation and spelling mistakes, fixing those is good.

And try and summarise the game a bit more succinctly, you don't need to explain the entire game and it's probably best that you don't. Many people who read reviews haven't actually got the game yet, but they're thinking about it; if you want them to buy it don't mention everything in case you mention something they decide they won't like, keep the plot information to a minimum to create a sense of mystery and so they can find out most things for themselves. I'd leave out the background story part entirely, or at least cut it down to one key sentence, and stick to the beginning of the game, up until the character starts actively seeking the bad guy.