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Misschoco
May 29 2007, 04:16 PM
my obsession for naruto has come back again as you can already tell :rolleyes:

heres another sig i made.Hey i tried its either crap or good :crazy:

http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/3.jpg



btw:im a sucka for brushing XD

Yurian
May 29 2007, 04:22 PM
That's great misschoco :)

Maybe the font could be more 'explosive' like the character is? The effects are really good.

Lifrasthir
May 29 2007, 05:40 PM
It looks good. The font could be a little bigger though.

Hitoshura
May 29 2007, 06:15 PM
Nice sig

even though Naruto is lame. xP

Lucrecia
May 29 2007, 07:25 PM
Love that sig too!!! :D Oh and I'm a big naruto fan as well. :cunning:

Askyria
May 29 2007, 08:18 PM
Ooh, it's really good, but the black x's/dots are kind of distracting, taking away from the focal point, the character. You could still keep it there, but I suggest using a softer brush to erase parts of it so it doesn't cover the character or the parts around the text/overlay lines under the text.

Maybe you could make Naruto stand out more? The yellow background there sort of blends into his hair xD

But, I love everything else. Good job! :D

Aquaman
May 29 2007, 10:28 PM
Oh, I would make the background a dark blackish color and then take a brush and draw some shatter imprints in it show it looks like Naruto making the background explode......:nod:

Ultima Star
May 29 2007, 11:32 PM
I think that it's really is a good one:nod:
But perhaps if you make the font a bit bigger it would look a lot better ;)

Rikku
May 30 2007, 02:06 AM
Nyah, your flow and direction are definitely improving. But yes, you need to make your stock stand out a bit more; it's blending to the point where it's acceptable, but only by a margin. Anymore and I would've called it overblending. Anyway, the black dots do detract from the focal point, especially considering that the focal point is supposed to be so bright. It takes away from the violent and stark brightness, and makes it seem less dramatic. Or maybe I AM losing my judgement.

The text, I dislike. It doesn't really fit into the rest of the theme, and the underlining features don't look real nice with the black line.

Misschoco
May 30 2007, 06:12 PM
okay i'v tried to make the render more of a focus now below is an edited version compared with the original....theres subtle differences but i hope it worked :'(


before

http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/3.jpg

after

http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/7.jpg

Lifrasthir
May 30 2007, 06:14 PM
The font still can be a little bit bigger. Otherwise I think it's pretty good.

Misschoco
May 30 2007, 06:20 PM
The font still can be a little bit bigger. Otherwise I think it's pretty good.
okay i made the font a lil bigger and compared with the original composition of the sig

whad'ya think

before
http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/3.jpg
After
http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/9.jpg

Lifrasthir
May 30 2007, 06:34 PM
Looks much better.

Askyria
May 30 2007, 09:36 PM
Eeeh, I like the original more. It's more in-your-face and intense. The new one's way too toned down and muddy (brown, green :|). The dots are still distracting and they're all over his fingers xD

The font I guess is a little better cause it's larger. Experiment with fonts, though. That one's a little bit plain.

Nice try though ^^

Yurian
May 30 2007, 09:45 PM
o_O I don't see any dots on his fingers. I like the first one more. I didn't think it was good save for the minute font issue. Go to dafont.com! They have a lot of good font choices there :)

Askyria
May 30 2007, 09:55 PM
Yeah, there are.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/Jaded-Ice/dots.png

In my opinion the dots are overall pretty distracting, but if you want to keep them I think you should probably erase the bit on his finger there.

XxFeaRLeSsxX
May 31 2007, 08:09 AM
Yeah, there are.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/Jaded-Ice/dots.png

In my opinion the dots are overall pretty distracting, but if you want to keep them I think you should probably erase the bit on his finger there.

I agree with Askyria and Yurian, the first one is more colorful and catchy :P

LOOK!! THE EVIL DOTS HAVE RETURNEDDDD!!! lol I didn't notice until you pointed it out... I really don't care of its existance :rolleyes:

Misschoco
May 31 2007, 11:17 AM
Yeah, there are.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k45/Jaded-Ice/dots.png

In my opinion the dots are overall pretty distracting, but if you want to keep them I think you should probably erase the bit on his finger there.
dang i didnt see the dots on his fingers

here's the sig again with the dots on his fingers gone........well actually most of the dots gone

probably a futile attempt of mine;) but whats the verdict??

http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/12.jpg

Lucrecia
May 31 2007, 11:20 AM
dang i didnt see the dots on his fingers

here's the sig again with the dots on his fingers gone........well actually most of the dots gone

probably a futile attempt of mine;) but whats the verdict??

http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/11.jpg

Both sigs look fine to me.

Lifrasthir
May 31 2007, 01:19 PM
The dots were kinda distracting but I like it now.

Askyria
May 31 2007, 08:43 PM
Nice, but maybe you should bring some of the red on the left to the right as well. It helps to contrast, and in my opinion contrast makes everything look better if you use it sparingly xD

Oh, and if you look really really really closely you can see a faint bit of dots in his hair. XD A bit's on his finger on his left too. Oh, the rabid dots :0

But it's looking a heck of a lot nicer. Well done :D

MaoraTezuka
Jun 01 2007, 09:24 AM
the last one is too bright... I love the one u take as ur sig ;)
and yups... u did so well ^_^

Misschoco
Jun 07 2007, 06:35 PM
Nice, but maybe you should bring some of the red on the left to the right as well. It helps to contrast, and in my opinion contrast makes everything look better if you use it sparingly xD

Oh, and if you look really really really closely you can see a faint bit of dots in his hair. XD A bit's on his finger on his left too. Oh, the rabid dots :0

But it's looking a heck of a lot nicer. Well done :D
im doing my best ^_^

so.........heres the sig again with a lil more contrast and red on the right as well as the left

whadyathink??

Before

http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/11.jpg

After
http://www.image-upload.net/files/6983/14.jpg

Lifrasthir
Jun 07 2007, 06:39 PM
What does it look like without the dots Miss Choco? Just curious.